What comments or corrections were made on your essays structure and style of essay?

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Your instructor provided you with feedback regarding areas in which you are strong, as well as a rubric that includes feedback as well. Writing in narrative style, identify several strengths using no fewer than 50 words. (Do not include the instructions in this count.)

2. Opportunities:

Your instructor provided you with feedback regarding areas in which you are not as strong. Writing in narrative style, identify 3 areas of improvement on which you might work using no fewer than 100 words each. The list below is not complete, but it should provide some suggestions from which to structure a lesson and homework plan.

What comments or corrections were made regarding your papers setup? Title? Spacing?
What comments or corrections were made on your essays structure and style of essay?
What comments or corrections were made about the length of your paper? Was it a minimum submission or sound and substantial?
What comments or corrections were made about your thesis statement?
What comments or corrections were made about your topic sentences?
What comments or corrections were made about your about your use of transitions?
What comments were made about the use of quotes or paraphrased sources?
What comments or corrections were given to you about your language errors?
What comments were made about the use of your resources?
Were there any other comments your instructor asked you to pay particular attention to in the future?

3. Lesson and Homework Plan:

Be specific in your identification of three (3) opportunities to improve, and once you have identified these opportunities, suggest ways you might be able to overcome these difficulties in your writing.

You might find a YouTube video (include links) that you can watch that would clarify the item your instructor pointed out in his/her feedback. You might search for helpful websites (include links) that are useful. These may include websites that host exercises. You should have at least 2 resources for each of the 3 lesson opportunities you select.